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This is a good introduction to your main character, and I think I might do that when I plan to reanimate EP1 of "The Alphabet Boys" by not featuring it in an actual episode but rather a standalone video.

WIIIIIIIIII!!

Grew up watching this back in 2009 when I was a little child! Now I am rewatching a timeless classic!

This is quite enjoyable! I really like the storyline, art direction and everything that comes with it!
Off to a great start, I'd say!

Your showreel looks great!! I like how you included your best work and a good music choice in the video.

May I give you some advice on your next showreel? You might need to outline the software you used in each production you have produced in your showreel because it usually gives clients an overview of what your workflow is. Aside from that, good showreel! :)

CameronBlake responds:

Thanks for the feedback! That is definitely something I'll consider for my next reel!

I think that this short film has potential for a full series. Dork, or Jon, you made an awesome animation.

May I just point out 2 criticisms when you do a full series?

No. 1 - You could do with making mouth and arm movements while the characters are speaking, or doing actions as this creates emphasis.
No. 2 - Lighting needs to be added to the characters and backgrounds in correlation to the settings.

Nonetheless, you have done well, Dorky!

Liked the work you provided, but Golden and Bucket sound as if they're exactly the same.
You might want to make Bucket have a different voice actor, or make him sound different from Golden.

Also, shouldn't Bucket's arms be moving up and down in a linear movement while he is flying as well as the wings flapping?

GFSToonies responds:

Well, in the future, i might find a different voice actor of Bucket. also, yeah, i should've done that about his arms.

I am a talented animator, singer, screenwriter and voice actor who created my first hit animated series, "Super AniMario Bros". I am currently working on a new series, "The Alphabet Boys"!

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